First thoughts - Peer reviewing

I am peer reviewing a colleague's draft of Project 3, and my first reaction is that as a reader, it is pretty clear that the author feels two ways about this place, and why.  The paragraph opens up with a metaphor, and then goes on to describing the negative feelings the author has about this place.  But the last line explains that is precisely because of these "negative" aspects that she loves this place so much.  Maybe I am biased because I share her position, but I think that this paradox really delivers the message she wants to convey.